Assessment 'RESEARCH' SJA Oct 3rd

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- Charlotte, I have thoroughly enjoyed looking over your blog and reading your posts. You are clearly investing much more time in your blog of recent weeks, and you are really starting to show what you are capable of - please keep up the time investment Charlotte!
- Many of your posts are very good to absolutely excellent, I really like to overall 'visual look' of your blog, there's lots of technical skill shown in that things are moving, you have gone to the effort of creating your JING video of the Low Budget video. I'm so pleased you took up this idea - and if you have any more time to go back to some of your POP or ROCK analytical posts to do something similar, it will be very worthwhile.
- Post 14 - Genre research - 5 music videos is very good - I was so pleased to finally read a blog with all 5 there. Perhaps go back and improve a couple of the entries (as some are a little vague compared to others)
-Post 15 is really visual - looks great


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- Posts 9-11 - Theories - missing??
- Post 13 - Mood board is good- needs a paragraph included underneath where you explain how / why the artists you have shown represent themselves in this way
- Post 17 - Record Label reserach - great so far, but one more needed
- Post 18 - Advert research - Great so far, but one more advert needed
- Post 19 - Scan / screen grab your actual questionnaire
- Post 20 - Really great graphs - I'm so pleased Survey Monkey was a success for you - but you do need to include a paragraph basically for each one explaining how you will use this information in the shaping of your own music video to appeal to your target audience

Overall effort - VG (Very Good)... but still has to be 'IN' IMPROVEMENT NEEDED  Charlotte, as there's work that needed to be complete by today. I will really look forward to hopefully being able to give your RESEACRH section an 'Excellent' when all posts are complete and to a brilliant standard as I'm seeing in many.  Please make sure you have all Research posts completed by this Friday Oct 7th for Final assessment.
Thank you for investing effort into your blog, again, I have really enjoyed reading through your work so far. Friday it the absolute final deadline Charlotte.