Planning posts - checking your progress Oct 16th SJA

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• The planning posts that are there show imaginative efforts with ICT to present and communicate ideas.
• The use of short iMovie to communicate your 'initial ideas' is really effective
• I thought your practice CD cover on photoshop looked really good - you selected an excellent photograph that seemed really suited to the idea of 'artist' and similiar representations in this genre. The font choice also worked really well with the simplicity of your image, as did the sepia effect. Nice work on this.

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• There are several planning posts that need to be improved still Charlotte. Your post on 'roles' needs more information to explain your role and Brittany's role. You obviously need to come back to the post on 'Technical tutorials' - and upload your greeenscreen / final cut work to this. You currently just have a few photos for this post - I'm sure you will come back to this and provide written or recorded verbal information...
• Lyrics annotation is OK... but needs more detail about locations / performance / narrative / what you plan to film / show the audience for each verse / line?
• Where is your photoshop work for the advert planning / ideas? This needs to be there. You also need to provide written explanation about your ideas / thinking behind the image of jade you used for the CD cover design practice task. Please don't just upload an image without any explanation Charlotte.

Planning progress so far: GD (Good) and IN (Improvement Needed) - you know you will have to come back to the posts you have completed for Planning so far and develop them further. To reach the top of Level 4 (required for your 'A') you really need to show creativity, innovation, imagination and ICT technical flair for every post. The 'Planning' section of your blog really should provide you with loads of opportunities to demonstrate all of these things.